Sounds file, how awesome! Hmmm, I wish I could record as well....or even better, get a native speaker to do so! While I am familiar with the language, nothing beats someone who's learnt it from birth!

You've certainly did great! I'm realizing though that maybe I should show the stressed syllables in the transliteration. Like you'd say in Russian: Нужна говорить громко Núzhna gavarít' grómka - you have to speaky loudly. It is especially true of stressed syllables. One should not hesitate to insist on them, and to let the rest slip in the backgroud (well, not too much, LOL)